City vs. Country
These two ways of life have a lot of differences, such as work, the environment and the entertainment. Let me discuss the facts about these lifestyles below.
A good aspect for living in the city is for example, that there are better services like hospitals and school. Wherever you go there is a great choice of stores and supermarkets.
Another positive point is that everything is directly accessible because of the good traffic transport. Also very important are the great discos, bars and concerts thereto spend the nights there. On the one hand you never have to be bored, but on the other hand it’s a fact, that the people living in a city, are even more stressed than the ones who are living on the countryside. The stress could start early in the morning, when you awake from the noises outside on the street and goes on with a traffic jam about noon.
Unlike than to the country life, where you are able to enjoy the silence and where it’s easier to get in touch with nature. In the opposite of the city, a country usually has got clean air and less pollution. The tribulations of city life could incite anyone to move to the country. When you live in small town the people mostly are more helpful, because they know each other. Otherwise are also there some negative aspects! For example if someone needs help, the fire brigade has got a long way until the arriving. That’s because of the wide distances between the houses. Also most of the countrymen and countrywomen have to cover a long distance to their workplace.
All in all I prefer living in a small town or in a township. In fact I would be too stressed in a town and in the country, I would be afraid of housebreaker or of the never ending boredom.
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Freitag, 14. November 2008
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You don't introduce your paragraphs properly.
expression: 'öffentlicher Verkehr" = public transport; thereto??;
in the countryside, in the street; "Unlike than to the country life, where you are able to enjoy the silence and where it’s easier to get in touch with nature." C??; "In the opposite of the city, a country usually has got clean air and less pollution." C?? [a country = ein Land wie z. B. Österreich]; "until the arriving" C?; "Township" = a South African town where only blacks lived during; in the US and Canada, a unit of local government consisting of a town and the area surrounding it; "housebreaker" C?? (burglar)
grammar: "Otherwise are also there some negative aspects! ";
This sentence doesn't fit into your paragraph: "The tribulations of city life could incite anyone to move to the country.";
"rush hour" - traffic jam;
Note that this is only a selection of mistakes. You start well but there are many,many mistakes in the second half of your essay. It sounds as if you're translating word by word or as if a machine had translated this.
The basic structure is acceptable.
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